one
everyday I wish that I can turn back time back before my mind was haunted torcherd by my own rhyme back when it was easy when love seamed like a game before you broke my heart before you brought this pain girl you meant the world to me now i just want to be free cause now the whole world will see all these guys fed full of fuckin lies that ain't love in your eyes that is death in disguise how many chances how many tries since it's stopped being any surprise but girl I still feel you inside all this frustration I try to hide now my heart feels so tied cause your love for me has died why did you leave it at why when I hear your name i want to cry when I hear your name i want to die you said you care but life ain't fair cause you were never fuckin there what is now a whimper used to be a raor the land i walk on now above i used to soar what was once a legend is now foklore you left me as an apple without a core
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Hi there @jaseshearer.6705848, Here's some feedback on your track 'one', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 Your vocals are nice and clear, keep that same mic set up! 🤙 Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 We like the rhymes in here, good job.✨ We like the underlying theme behind the bars! Good flow here, it really adds some sauce to your track. 🎶 Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎