What's up @dubsdeville,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'TurfTested'! π₯
Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix!
This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work.
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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What's up @dubsdeville, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'TurfTested'! π₯ Seems like your voice is getting hidden by the beat, put the vocals up for a great mix! This is a good start but we think your bars could use some work. Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. π€ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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