knock you out the box

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verse 1) I waiting and watching,for someone slip! chorus) cuz I'm a criminal, gangsta', terrorist, M.C. I'm speaking, lyrical viruses, authority call a desiese. please don't hate me for what i believe. I'll knock you out the box kid, before you roll up your sleaves. ( say one more time) verse 2) . I be, braking elbows, and , nosesses I'm explosive. I'm causing more damage, then being underseage by locust, so be focused, when you deal with me. I'll burn your ass up, like a ton of cannabis leaves. so sucka' please. hand over your wallet, I don't pick pokets in the progress, hand over, the watch, gold chain, rings, and your daughters locket. so i can take it back to my pad. mknowmelt it down and hawck-it. so the man, can't trace it back to me. instead they say fuck-it. i ducked it the man, like an old revolutionary musket..they busted, they obsolete, they cant compeat, with the new age criminal, high tech, subliminal, I'm running through congress, like an insane, sentinel, slappin' the back of there head, letten them know that I am unbeatable especially when i bang with a pistol. im leathel, when I unload shells into the system!

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5 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @fabianalt! Thanks for sharing 'knock you out the box' with us! 💥 Almost a perfect mix. Try increasing the vocal volume a lil' so we can hear you better over the beat. The rhyming is well put together. ✨ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. 🎶 Good choice of beat! 🎼 We are liking your use of effects on this one. ⭐ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

GMC AB

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉

DIVINE CYPHR AKA DJMASTERBLEND

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Kia33

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rhymaholic Wheels

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉