new dawn
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#NewDawn she a lady lion im a baby giant...wen we put two together that giant lion ..... pressure we applying....we want all appliance....know u heard the word bitch get in compliance im like a airplane nigga fuck a pilot i got front roll seat incase somebody dieing i just play the hand im dealt....tryna keep from di
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Hi there @marlonjackson.5914, Here's some feedback on your track 'new dawn', thank you for sharing with us! ๐ฅ Your voice is sounding a bit loud in the mix, you may wanna put it down a little. Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. ๐ Love how you're flowing on this, keep it up. ๐ถ Nice timing! Never left the beat once! Great beat choice, really works with the track! You ATE on this track! Absolute heat ๐ฅต This track has all the qualities of a great contest entry, some fire bars and a great delivery style. We just think you're let down by the volume of your vocals, if you could turn them down a bit we're sure the recording quality would improve! You've got a lot of flair and creativity, we love this! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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