Hi @jonathanlang.2897!
Welcome to our feedback of 'V For Vendetta '! ๐ฅ
Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little!
This track needs a concept that listeners can engage with, try creating a track with more meaning.
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Here are my scores: Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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my mom died on a aderol overdose
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hi @jonathanlang.2897! Welcome to our feedback of 'V For Vendetta '! ๐ฅ Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! This track needs a concept that listeners can engage with, try creating a track with more meaning. Great beat choice, really works with the track! The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. ๐ We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ