real shit

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real shit

Ik some real ppl going thru it 2x Everybody going thru it 2× (I'M) just a young nigga gettin to it All of this pain dont know where to start Hand on my heart I know I'm fire (click click) All I needed was a spark Stories, Illustrated thru da art You see it on me even in the dark Open ya mouth let me put it in park Ik u shocked, cus this 1 off da chart (Verse) Dip off w da set Take off n a jet Ya bitch on her knees Giving neck Who's next Fuck all da funny Where da money? check Papi said bet So u know what's next I'd like to order Pls Can I order few quart p's So da homies can eat I got it on  Pls don't make me use it Playing it smart Don't do nothing foolish I got it poppin da homie's lit I gotta lick Think we all can split Bitches be poppin twerkin, showing tits All for the gram, snap, and da tik Bag got some p's in it time to go Threw my homie da key Told him vamano Don't stop for nobody Really nobody U get boxed in better let it go

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5 years ago

Hey @janero.6035, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'real shit'! 💥 The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. The lyrics are fire, nicely done! 🙌 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 This is how beats and lyrics should go together, you've got great timing, well done! 🌠 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 A lil' more work and you're gonna take off, keep pushin'. 🤟 Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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