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I swear on my mama we lit I just want a bitch to kiss I want a new nigga a diss hold up bitch I'm taking a piss niggas be fucking then leave the kids i just be fucking a different bitch one gunshot cause I never miss and ima keep it like this. I'm in the rarri no I'm not sorry hop in the lamb while I'm wit a shawty this is a beam glock in my rarri I be ya playboi carti dont turn me up dont get me started if you want smoke better be sorry boy just got smoked he in the trunky. Chill wit a different hoe I eat her like oreos the girl is my oreo sneaky link that girl on the low I hit her once dont tell the bros do it for once and she wanna are we gonna be something hell no.

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LILZIGGY23

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5 years ago

🪬9elevin🪬

5 years ago

u ain't it bra 🗑️

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @coldgaming, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'on my mama we lit', here are our thoughts 💥 Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 Good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. 🎼 Try using some of our vocal FX (ft. Autotune!) to spice up your next track! You got talent, you just need to polish your tracks a bit more! You're almost there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Kds Lawani

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

trunna

5 years ago

Thx for da feed back bru bru stay up

LILZIGGY23

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5 years ago

@trunna the song is alright but I dont know what your saying

Maurice Wisdom Bishop

5 years ago