Yo @babacarseck.3905!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'tarlm'! π₯
Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! π§
Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here.
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Yo @babacarseck.3905! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'tarlm'! π₯ Using headphones can drastically improve the quality of your track, try using them next time to give your track that extra boost! π§ Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Try improving your timing, you're not quite on beat here. The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. Becoming an accomplished rapper is a grind, keep working on your craft and your talent will be clear soon. π We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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