Hey Ma
Hey ma, it's me again, I uh, I kinda need you right now. Can you uh, just call me back? Please... Yo ma, I don't understand, Why you leave us for another man? Moved on with your life, And now I can barely stand. I'm falling apart, Without you I don't know where to start. Tryna move on, but I know I can't, Without you, I don't have a heart. Been spending days in my room, Crying praying above. Looking up at the moon, Hoping God will save us. Knowing that we may be doomed, Still praying because, I don't know what to do. I don't wanna lose you. Nah, I'm trying to fight back, Get us on the right track. It kills me that these moments, May end up being our last. We need you mom, We need you to come back. We need you to care, We don't want to see dad relapse. I promise that I'll do the chores, Never complain or hurt you more. Mom, I would do anything, Just to see you at my door. It's been a few years, And I still cry praying up above. Hoping that one day, You will come back to us, yeah.
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