Hey @divn,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Ohio go getter '! ๐ฅ
Your vocals are really buried in that mix, try turning them up next time!
Try and work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those.
The beat is dope! And we also love the sound of your voice!
The real issue right now is the volume!
Turn ya self up in the mix to get the turbo boosters going on this tune so we can really hear that fast talking!!
We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! ๐
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @divn, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Ohio go getter '! ๐ฅ Your vocals are really buried in that mix, try turning them up next time! Try and work on improving how you deliver your bars and different flows to your tracks. You fell off the beat a couple times! Give it a listen back, find the parts where you're off and practice those. The beat is dope! And we also love the sound of your voice! The real issue right now is the volume! Turn ya self up in the mix to get the turbo boosters going on this tune so we can really hear that fast talking!! We think you've got something, you just need a bit more work to make something great! ๐ We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
peep my latest battle and drop an honest vote if you have time Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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