overdosed on pain - brandon lee

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I use to love art. I taught myself how to draw cause I had to lock myself in my room while my dad would beat my brothers and mom. I know yall don't want to hear this. but its the only way I will be heard. there is so much to my life. I dropped out of high school to work cause my parents kept threatening to throw me out if I didn't help. my parents never never ever had a job. I taught myself how to work. I taught myself everything. I feel like my body is giving out on me. I'm breaking down. mentally I'm torn into peices. I can't draw cause I'm so focused on making money. I got talents and I pray the world sees it before I'm dead..... #mytestimony #freestyle #artist .......

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Bmackadelic

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5 years ago

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LyrℹC🅰️lSpℹt (FA)

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

That one Indian

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

YOUNG SAUVAGE

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Amarius Hill

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Bmackadelic

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5 years ago

I will try to drop more songs but I don't have a studio or nun..

Bmackadelic

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5 years ago

I know this aint perfect yall. I know. yall should hear my old stuff on here before I tried fitting in. I just want to be heard...

F3nomin4L Hoe

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉

EDZTO

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @brad.4904! Try adjusting the vocal volume to get the right balance. Maybe adjusting the mic position would help get a better sound. Also, practice on your timing, you're not quite on beat with this one. We can tell there's an authentic story that you want to share, and better delivery can really showcase your lyrics. Also, consider incorporating some vocal effects to elevate the sound of this track. Sometimes it's hard to create a perfect track, keep trying and work on your craft! 👌 We hope you send us more tracks in the future, we'd love to see how you take our feedback on board! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

☝🏾BIGSWYPER🦊

5 years ago

#IJUSTSWYPEDOWN Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

bless3

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: On point 🎯

The 1 one

1 month ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

7 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥