Tell me

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@ShortieLynn tell me, tell me that you love me, tell me im the only one. tell me, tell me there are no others. no lovers. dont make me run. our time has just begun. baby i need you yes i do dont be a fool. acting uncool. dont turn your back on me can you see we were meant to be, say you want me. this life is unpleasant without you present. i need you like i need air to breathe. baby please believe in me. so, tell me. tell me you love me &tell me im the only one. tell me there no others. i wont run and come undone. tell me can you love me like u promised to? honest and true? as God as my witness im all in, i always have been. im ready for our lives to begin. from deep within my heart, youre my counterpart. soul mate do t make me wait.

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ShortieLynn

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5 years ago

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Darkness🗝️

5 years ago

Are you looking for a crew

$u¿cidal Iso

3 years ago

nice job. keep doing what you do it's 🔥

👑 Melinated King👑

5 years ago

#shortielynn send some support and love back to my songs. #SaveTheseKidsNow1

Darkness🗝️

5 years ago

Amazing voice lots of character 🧨💥🔥📌📌

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hey @shortielynn, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Tell me', here are our thoughts 💥 The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! Your use of effects is pretty good on this, nicely done! ⭐ Great energy, such chill vibes. 🌊 Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Linkx

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Cutterbars

5 years ago

awesome song in voice

Pan_Jae

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

WINE ERA

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥