Yo @rexfordcahill!
Waddup. Let's take a look at 'tattered and bruised'! ๐ฅ
Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ง
The beat is drowning out the vocals a little, try turning the vocals up!
Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐
The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ
Laaaaid back! We're feeling the chill on this one. ๐
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Yo @rexfordcahill! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'tattered and bruised'! ๐ฅ Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! ๐ง The beat is drowning out the vocals a little, try turning the vocals up! Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. ๐ The beat is fire, nice choice. ๐ผ Laaaaid back! We're feeling the chill on this one. ๐ With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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