Memories (15:14)
They ask me am I okay, they ask me if I'm happy Are they asking me that be Cause of the shit that's been thrown at me? Or am I just a little snappy and they genuinely care? Doody, most of my life it's just been me and you there And I continuously stare at pictures of you I never got to say I love you as much as I wanted to, but I do Yeah, I say it now when you can't hear me What the fuck good does that do me now? But somehow I know you're near me in presence Oh, I went and dropped some presents off for Easter To them two little beautiful boys of yours to try to ease their Minds a little, and dog, you'll never believe this But Sharonda actually talks to me now — Jesus! And everyone else is just tryin' to pick up the pieces Man, how could you touch so many fuckin' lives and just leave us? They say grievance has a way of affectin' everyone different If it's true, how the fuck am I supposed to get over you? Difficult as it sounds
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Hey @eminemstan256, We're gonna review your track 'Memories (15:14)'. Let's get it! Using headphones next time would defo improve the quality of your tracks! 🎧 Think about which words you emphasize and where they fall on the beat to give a good rhythm to the track. Good choice of beat! 🎼 The recording quality could be improved. Try playing around with your mic positioning to improve the quality. Try out a Masterclass if you're looking to hone your rap skills! It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎