Yo @oa7v4gpoxr!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'first best day'!
We think the delivery is fire, keep it up.
Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track!
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo @oa7v4gpoxr! Waddup - let's take a look at 'first best day'! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Your voice is real quiet in the mix, you should put it way up. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team