Rap Fame A&R

3 years ago

Hi @jaedaartwrld! Welcome to our feedback of 'my first song- lil J'! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Dope recording, nicely done. Dope work with the effects, nicely done. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

LIL PJ

3 years ago

Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard. its my first rap when everyone for my name im like its jaeda like patata and tamata