Hey @mauricehopings!
Thanks for sharing 'Shoot you in your neck' with us!
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Btk
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
#¹PACKEDUP Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @mauricehopings! Thanks for sharing 'Shoot you in your neck' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
you don't even portray the shit you speaking
THIS SHITS ASS!!!
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥