Pick up the pen,
Write down the lyrics that
Come from your head
Straight from the heart.
Even the
Best rappers ever had to
Start
Somewhere,
Very far from the end.
So pick up the pen.
Write down the lyrics that
Come to your mind.
If you’re not serious, then
You may never find
The voice inside
So once again,
Yo pick up the pen.
Hi @ajoc!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Lyrics inside my head'!
Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try practising effects more to see how they work best.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Pick up the pen, Write down the lyrics that Come from your head Straight from the heart. Even the Best rappers ever had to Start Somewhere, Very far from the end. So pick up the pen. Write down the lyrics that Come to your mind. If you’re not serious, then You may never find The voice inside So once again, Yo pick up the pen.
#280kplayz Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi @ajoc! Welcome to our feedback of 'Lyrics inside my head'! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥