Collide๐
Later we Collide and I promise you with pride never got a chance baby sorry but I tried thinkin you the one and I know this you my bride everything was fine everyday I made you cry sorry that I Lied put my actions on the side Look me in the eye and you tell me that I'm high thinkin bout the time that we made each other proud my Love will never die and I'm happy that you mine everything is fine i just promise you my Line if you keep my Vows I swear this gon be the time amo show you Love even if the odds are tight fuck my baby right we gon make it in the night know you Love the pain and i Love it when you play focus on my babe i just know my Love was made nothin made me change you the person with the strains everything you say is important for your sake never show my smile if I know my Love is fake Later we gon smile and forget about the past Life is never fair but I swear I'm gon be there in your Life I dare you my baby I dont share we were meant to be aint nobody break the bond yeah my Babe is strong and I Love her to beyond if I were to change I would never to respond Baby you the queen i just noticed you my twin callin everday hope you see my fuckin change bitches Lookin strange cause they jealous cause I gained everything was right yeah i messed up on the chain your heart is shoutin Loud pouring Love I'm really Proud Lookin to the clouds damn I miss the day I vowed bitches Cheatin now, that is fuckin dissallowed Later we Collide you my shit and ride or die yeah I got your back you not racist cause I'm black hope you change your ways then you Listen to this track yeah no mistake made and I did them Cause I'm slack sorry for my whack this dont matter its a fact I been feelin sad cause without you I go mad makin you the best was attracted to your scent
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Hi @lindanilindokuhle! Welcome to our feedback of 'Collide๐'! The vocals sound great, nicely done! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The beat is dope and really works for this track. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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Your lyricism is next level, putting the competition with every line! ๐๐ฅถ Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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