Off My mind
hey girl ever since i met you i cant get you off my mind maybe it cause yur the only girl that i can find maybe its cause yur the only girl that can be kind but baby i just got to get you off my mind but right now you can stay cause someday i wilk make you my bae bit you say you barley know me i promise i will give you the key to my heart as long as you dont tear me apart but right now i cant get you off my mind i wish you were by my side cause one day i will make you my bride cause i want to make you my Miss i just want to get a kiss you would be my dream come true if only i could be with youi will be the guy you will never forgeti knew i liked you the first time we met but i cant get you off my mind when we are together there is no looking behind we would make a great team thats all i could ever dream
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hey girl ever since i met you i cant get you off my mind maybe it cause yur the only girl that i can find maybe its cause yur the only girl that can be kind but baby i just got to get you off my mind but right now you can stay cause someday i wilk make you my bae bit you say you barley know me i promise i will give you the key to my heart as long as you dont tear me apart but right now i cant get you off my mind i wish you were by my side cause one day i will make you my bride cause i want to make you my Miss i just want to get a kiss you would be my dream come true if only i could be with youi will be the guy you will never forgeti knew i liked you the first time we met but i cant get you off my mind when we are together there is no looking behind we would make a great team thats all i could ever dream
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Hey @lilxbat! Thanks for sharing 'Off My mind' with us! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! The beat is fire, nice choice. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ