lack of passion
46 Plays
•17 Aug 2021
A little splash too forget the pain when ya sit In the middle of a curb in a ditch Thinking to ya self if its ever gone switch lanes or hit the breaks and probably spin both ways could I be In a daze or in a race to break the chains as I walk through the flames you can try and tame me mabey call me names and shame me but I'll be the blame when ya twitching with ya head caved in smiling as I snicker quicker then a bit of rope that snaps back bones cracks phones and attack drones attack homes that lack security are ya hearing me the devils steering the vehicle the fear that he has appeared in these emcees
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Hi @travisleach! Welcome to our feedback of 'lack of passion'! Your vocals are a great volume in the mix, nicely done. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
A little splash too forget the pain when ya sit In the middle of a curb in a ditch Thinking to ya self if its ever gone switch lanes or hit the breaks and probably spin both ways could I be In a daze or in a race to break the chains as I walk through the flames you can try and tame me mabey call me names and shame me but I'll be the blame when ya twitching with ya head caved in smiling as I snicker quicker then a bit of rope that snaps back bones cracks phones and attack drones attack homes that lack security are ya hearing me the devils steering the vehicle the fear that he has appeared in these emcees
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