life man
Djyii55 Plays
•12 Aug 2021
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hi @djyoolaa! Welcome to our feedback of 'life man'! Your vocals are really clear, that's amazing! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. We think your improvising could do with some work, just a little practice and you're there! Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! The beat is fire, nice choice. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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