Yo @williamhartman!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Real Life Trauma - 8_7_21, 6.38 PM'!
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together.
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, nice choice. Nicely done, you can feel the emotion on this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Real life trauma by whiteboi
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@rapfame_ar_team thanks. It was recorded off of a computer cuz ion got access to the outside rn. When I get out I’ll totally take it to the studio
Yo @williamhartman! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Real Life Trauma - 8_7_21, 6.38 PM'! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, nice choice. Nicely done, you can feel the emotion on this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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