Hi @spherhrsa!
Welcome to our feedback of ' Proud '!
Good choice of beat!
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound.
Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @spherhrsa! Welcome to our feedback of ' Proud '! Good choice of beat! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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