evdead

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evdead

(haha) yeah yeah I'm a beast I can't take it I really hope I make it, I just hope I'm awake to the packages yeah were savages yeah were savages yeah were savages I'm barely careless we were always reckless we fought until the dead all we wore red, we were all half dead

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5 years ago

(haha) yeah yeah I'm a beast I can't take it I really hope I make it, I just hope I'm awake to the packages yeah were savages yeah were savages yeah were savages I'm barely careless we were always reckless we fought until the dead all we wore red, we were all half dead

5 years ago

Not bad my brother I definitely feel like you need some works with the rhymes but keep working I definitely feel like for somebody as young as you are you doing good so keep pushing and show some love towards some of my projects

5 years ago

Yo @batttlemc! Waddup - let's take a look at 'evdead'! Good choice of beat! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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