Deeper
im getting myself into deep deep deeper silet creepers deep in these streets gotta retreat after a mjor meet with my peeps paper i mastered last week a sista i got fucken plastered who do I have to answer my moms got stage 2 cancer im fucken outraged popo wanna lock me up in a 5by5 cage sistas in raged no one else left to step step out on stage damn none but uncle same toget me harmed jamed up fucken bigs ill do my bid nomore will ibe fucken misfeed mislead indeed my feed is to enjoy deploy iant no hore that's for sure I never do it raw but I can make sure u fucken roar you better fucken tape it wire the scene but please keep it clean im leaned leaned back plug in that jack YouTube but don't forget im for hire if i catch u being sneak ie behind my back imma tell my lawyers i wasn't prepped nither kept now it's time for ya to intercept my pay better be correct i want a brand new jet thats what you'll get if i catch u deep deep deeper silent creeper s deep deep in these streets ill only if u wan wrapped it up i suggest a magnum before u can have some p
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im getting myself into deep deep deeper silet creepers deep in these streets gotta retreat after a mjor meet with my peeps paper i mastered last week a sista i got fucken plastered who do I have to answer my moms got stage 2 cancer im fucken outraged popo wanna lock me up in a 5by5 cage sistas in raged no one else left to step step out on stage damn none but uncle same toget me harmed jamed up fucken bigs ill do my bid nomore will ibe fucken misfeed mislead indeed my feed is to enjoy deploy iant no hore that's for sure I never do it raw but I can make sure u fucken roar you better fucken tape it wire the scene but please keep it clean im leaned leaned back plug in that jack YouTube but don't forget im for hire if i catch u being sneak ie behind my back imma tell my lawyers i wasn't prepped nither kept now it's time for ya to intercept my pay better be correct i want a brand new jet thats what you'll get if i catch u deep deep deeper silent creeper s deep deep in these streets ill only if u wan wrapped it up i suggest a magnum before u can have some p
@lorettaepstein well written 💕
Hi @lorettaepstein! Welcome to our feedback of 'Deeper'! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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SLEPT ON 😴 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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