Hey @daltondanielreardon!
Thanks for sharing 'rockbottom_to_raise' with us!
Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that.
Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through.
The beat is dope and really works for this track. This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
@jesusavesouls thank you this was for sure what I was going through at the time like 3 years ago could you check out "overcomer" and lmk your feedback please thank you
@daltondanielreardon I know you can just let whatever you have out and be creative if what you have doesn't rhyme look up different words that mean the same thing as what you're trying to say something I do
Do you have anything you made?
check out my other raps I'd greatly appreciate it thanks
@lilbunny.6679 hello yeah I have a hope and goals to become better but these are my experiences it's how I release what's inside my burdens my prayers my hurts everything that I struggle with its also how I release faith speaking words of life from death hope that makes sense I love to let it all go in rhymes thank you
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hey @daltondanielreardon! Thanks for sharing 'rockbottom_to_raise' with us! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. The beat is dope and really works for this track. This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
@daltondanielreardon I got you
@jesusavesouls thank you this was for sure what I was going through at the time like 3 years ago could you check out "overcomer" and lmk your feedback please thank you
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
@daltondanielreardon I know you can just let whatever you have out and be creative if what you have doesn't rhyme look up different words that mean the same thing as what you're trying to say something I do Do you have anything you made? check out my other raps I'd greatly appreciate it thanks
wow thank now let me see if I can make it
@lilbunny.6679 hello yeah I have a hope and goals to become better but these are my experiences it's how I release what's inside my burdens my prayers my hurts everything that I struggle with its also how I release faith speaking words of life from death hope that makes sense I love to let it all go in rhymes thank you
hello how to you come up with the rymes
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
dope bitch
nice
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ