STARCHARTED•☆°♡¿{IN}¿♡°☆•CHILDHOOD
who that still sad still actin like my dad sshort bits been said ya I was a kid n ya hed lose his lid outsiders hed forbid lasting did they lay eyes what he undid i forgave him no thisain't about him I wanna be me circa 2019 but whats done cant be undid dont stop stubborn taures bumpin trap the the fairies mr mojo dyanysus and Sagittarius rising over the horizon invitations to another drunken party dimensions of me myself n Id-no need show ID never be lonely but its not easy sometimes I wonder if i ever will never let a new friend close to me they dont wanna know what I seen jealous of the air i breathe n choke the same how much shameless shampoo do they use? my brains cooked fine as hell well done cooked like saint chook bless up bless and magics in the stars above always got me my imaginary friends were there n grew up to be propa kami nodes fairies spirits and all those wielded n shielded cyberpunk in the ruff internet isnt that tuff dial up and take it seriously smile into the mirror to god humanity nervous systems or fiber optif it mattered if synthetic artificial all intelligence is arrogance attacks applied w without wisdom so shitty shits shut up for a min on discord oh lordy lord im the enigma I'm impossible inna weirdo why don't you justify my lie of your assumed character and life father forgive them for they are meta troll fat lil gags fk a sick sobriety and wonder why me you have to see shit this you cannot miss close your eyes and ears and go to ur happy place I'm staying in trenches not watching from da benches goin tsk tsk like u at the fkin races racists im a punishment incantate wen aeries been with loftness but logically within Moonchild put on a charm or moods dads pretty good not quite god of war but I see a breakin break in the doors quaking but moonlight revenge of a shadow cancer can crea te it was slow drips of poison she knows how to break strings in hearts of harps oh hades have mercy on these fools for having lil magical monster like me unknowingly broken me
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who that still sad still actin like my dad sshort bits been said ya I was a kid n ya hed lose his lid outsiders hed forbid lasting did they lay eyes what he undid i forgave him no thisain't about him I wanna be me circa 2019 but whats done cant be undid dont stop stubborn taures bumpin trap the the fairies mr mojo dyanysus and Sagittarius rising over the horizon invitations to another drunken party dimensions of me myself n Id-no need show ID never be lonely but its not easy sometimes I wonder if i ever will never let a new friend close to me they dont wanna know what I seen jealous of the air i breathe n choke the same how much shameless shampoo do they use? my brains cooked fine as hell well done cooked like saint chook bless up bless and magics in the stars above always got me my imaginary friends were there n grew up to be propa kami nodes fairies spirits and all those wielded n shielded cyberpunk in the ruff internet isnt that tuff dial up and take it seriously smile into the mirror to god humanity nervous systems or fiber optif it mattered if synthetic artificial all intelligence is arrogance attacks applied w without wisdom so shitty shits shut up for a min on discord oh lordy lord im the enigma I'm impossible inna weirdo why don't you justify my lie of your assumed character and life father forgive them for they are meta troll fat lil gags fk a sick sobriety and wonder why me you have to see shit this you cannot miss close your eyes and ears and go to ur happy place I'm staying in trenches not watching from da benches goin tsk tsk like u at the fkin races racists im a punishment incantate wen aeries been with loftness but logically within Moonchild put on a charm or moods dads pretty good not quite god of war but I see a breakin break in the doors quaking but moonlight revenge of a shadow cancer can crea te it was slow drips of poison she knows how to break strings in hearts of harps oh hades have mercy on these fools for having lil magical monster like me unknowingly broken me
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Thanks for the advice🌟Solid🌟 I hope to fix her up a bit. There was some context to the helium barely translatable blabber...but nonetheless, yeah Id want some more decernable vocals and yeah I shoulda grabbed my headphones! That's all on me!😅
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Hey @NIHLITHEPARIAH! Thanks for sharing 'STARCHARTED•☆°♡¿{IN}¿♡°☆•CHILDHOOD ' with us! Good choice of beat! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Thank u it's a lil harder to hear and isnt in final form!!! but it's a close one lyrically to me!-I wanted it to sound like my static mindchatter as a 3rd grade kid, with all the indecernable sounds that would come wit being my only friend in my world. The hard of hearing listener would be my teacher yelling to 'speak up' in class. The teachers who judge and humiliate. They thought to dig deep n never saw the stars that came to be in my family. my Parents being at war with eachother. aries x cancer = stubborn sad taurus haha
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
this shyt different 💯💯💯
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