Bored (man law de tall)
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Wake up in the morning, ke bhoregile thata, Look around the room, And the feeling’s sad, Touch up on my pockets, nkana akena zaka have to make some cash, gore ke kgone go tsuba founela man doc kare betha letsogo Say he got somethings, sense adi feletse ka mofa 1 hour, Then he's coming through, ka mokwa ka flait are vitso vitso Then I ran out, fjoint on my mind kare bofa joint are he ain't smoke.smoke smoke weed no more kare why are aai ke masepa ema pele
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