Hi @tempernature!
Welcome to our feedback of 'living life out here'!
The rhyming is well put together. Your flow is amazing, keep that good work up!!
Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The camera doesn't seem to be stable, it's shaking a bit.
Good choice of beat! Great positivity, listeners like to feel good about themselves. Awesome sunny background, really helps the visual side of things.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @tempernature! Welcome to our feedback of 'living life out here'! The rhyming is well put together. Your flow is amazing, keep that good work up!! Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The camera doesn't seem to be stable, it's shaking a bit. Good choice of beat! Great positivity, listeners like to feel good about themselves. Awesome sunny background, really helps the visual side of things. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team