Hey @timijobuttler!
Thanks for sharing 'ow hear we go ' with us!
The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track!
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Good flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, great choice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
@hateyourwackness this shirtless bum sent me a battle 2 weaks. I usually just walk shirtless bums around until they hopefully realize that this app is 95percent male 4 percent dyke and 1 percent female.
I wasn't wanting to offend Timmy JO so, Rotten, will you tell Jimmy To that I don't like the way his false teeth look. And im gettig ready to accept his battle .....as a Mocking Bird . im gonna mock him. I think ill smoke the entire battle. Maybe fart . But , for me bro,, tell him his dentures need to have more shape. I don't wanna be battle rappin a mufkr with no shirt on and his teeth on the table and somebody walk in. Cause erybody already knows if some teeth are out ...MOC probably getting his dick sucked. I don't need this faggot gummin around me.
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Hey @timijobuttler! Thanks for sharing 'ow hear we go ' with us! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Good flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, great choice. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
@hateyourwackness this shirtless bum sent me a battle 2 weaks. I usually just walk shirtless bums around until they hopefully realize that this app is 95percent male 4 percent dyke and 1 percent female. I wasn't wanting to offend Timmy JO so, Rotten, will you tell Jimmy To that I don't like the way his false teeth look. And im gettig ready to accept his battle .....as a Mocking Bird . im gonna mock him. I think ill smoke the entire battle. Maybe fart . But , for me bro,, tell him his dentures need to have more shape. I don't wanna be battle rappin a mufkr with no shirt on and his teeth on the table and somebody walk in. Cause erybody already knows if some teeth are out ...MOC probably getting his dick sucked. I don't need this faggot gummin around me.