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victim's feelings

victim's feelings

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29 Jun 2021

victim's feelings yh ..i was nine and i was twelve when i finally saw that family hurts more that a stranger to all young girls and womens who went through rape got humiliated by the society we live in it will all pass let the past be the past and focus making your future magnificent And know that its not the end of the world Good times will come by this is Amber Toxic I was Nine I was twelve it was done by my uncle it was done by my step dad so young , ddid not know nothing Even our fears and feelings did not mean nothing that was the first time i knew its not about the dressing how drunk you should be before it happens Not even age so young like that not knowing that he had to do that i was undressed Then he did and the pain i felt was nothing compared to the satisfaction he gained being told to never say a thing to mommy it was something else if i knew that me running around with my little butts That would invite him to force his manhood on me instead of teaching about how to protect myself from other mens tactics its hurt its hurt so much that one man could make you feel that all one nightmare i wanna wake up on my pride will be taken away so yeah its not about the short dress let alone the body its self even worse that someone close to you can do it so who can we trust or run to when our aunties and mothers left us with them for them to take care of us they thought we're safe but then we had rapists in our homes just like betrayals it doesnt come too far and all i know is that it hurts we have rights but our rights are violated as if we don't exist anymore being judged by your own society it hurt more that your patner or someone you love could break your heart and break it into million pieces thats when a 14 years old girl like me who is valuable who has a great future ahead herself start having suicidal thoughts thinking that death is the only choice it hurts ×2 but when people close to us hurts us simply means they are not meant to be with us There is only one place where they deserve to be and that place is HELL nothing feels real life feels fake its tough waking to the same shit i wonder how happy i would be be i didnt even exist probably wouldn't care life is awful and it will never change yh ..my name is Amber Toxic

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3 years ago

Yo @daque! Waddup - let's take a look at 'victim's feelings '! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

3 years ago

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3 years ago

victim's feelings yh ..i was nine and i was twelve when i finally saw that family hurts more that a stranger to all young girls and womens who went through rape got humiliated by the society we live in it will all pass let the past be the past and focus making your future magnificent And know that its not the end of the world Good times will come by this is Amber Toxic I was Nine I was twelve it was done by my uncle it was done by my step dad so young , ddid not know nothing Even our fears and feelings did not mean nothing that was the first time i knew its not about the dressing how drunk you should be before it happens Not even age so young like that not knowing that he had to do that i was undressed Then he did and the pain i felt was nothing compared to the satisfaction he gained being told to never say a thing to mommy it was something else if i knew that me running around with my little butts That would invite him to force his manhood on me instead of teaching about how to protect myself from other mens tactics its hurt its hurt so much that one man could make you feel that all one nightmare i wanna wake up on my pride will be taken away so yeah its not about the short dress let alone the body its self even worse that someone close to you can do it so who can we trust or run to when our aunties and mothers left us with them for them to take care of us they thought we're safe but then we had rapists in our homes just like betrayals it doesnt come too far and all i know is that it hurts we have rights but our rights are violated as if we don't exist anymore being judged by your own society it hurt more that your patner or someone you love could break your heart and break it into million pieces thats when a 14 years old girl like me who is valuable who has a great future ahead herself start having suicidal thoughts thinking that death is the only choice it hurts ×2 but when people close to us hurts us simply means they are not meant to be with us There is only one place where they deserve to be and that place is HELL nothing feels real life feels fake its tough waking to the same shit i wonder how happy i would be be i didnt even exist probably wouldn't care life is awful and it will never change yh ..my name is Amber Toxic

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