I was only eighteen which was my late teen when I finally realized I had to switch lanes, all them friends got so lame it got so late to consulate man who can I blame?
this didn't sound right yeah damn, I knew I was right all along to say the world needed redemption so all the lost folks could head the right path with the pack and leave all the weight back, so they won't come back, I tried to contribute to bring back the lost Jack's but what I got was uhm leave us alone, we don't need help..I tried it again they fucked up again,I went on again it wasn't the same, man people are so insane I have already motivated a lot of people, pitched a lotta elevating shit in they minds so they could contradict the gravity theory indirect ,yeah everyone should rise and never fall these was what I told myself, fuck but how can this work if everyone is against each other some other weird shit flowing inside the human mind ..Aah never mind that one reason this world is fucked, is it because it was created? No, its because it has got a lot of negative people who won't just avoid negativity when doing activities that are so sensitivity.yeah the last line was intended for the negative Folks.
Hey @middlestan!
Thanks for sharing 'Tries' with us!
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well.
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix.
Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, good choice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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I was only eighteen which was my late teen when I finally realized I had to switch lanes, all them friends got so lame it got so late to consulate man who can I blame? this didn't sound right yeah damn, I knew I was right all along to say the world needed redemption so all the lost folks could head the right path with the pack and leave all the weight back, so they won't come back, I tried to contribute to bring back the lost Jack's but what I got was uhm leave us alone, we don't need help..I tried it again they fucked up again,I went on again it wasn't the same, man people are so insane I have already motivated a lot of people, pitched a lotta elevating shit in they minds so they could contradict the gravity theory indirect ,yeah everyone should rise and never fall these was what I told myself, fuck but how can this work if everyone is against each other some other weird shit flowing inside the human mind ..Aah never mind that one reason this world is fucked, is it because it was created? No, its because it has got a lot of negative people who won't just avoid negativity when doing activities that are so sensitivity.yeah the last line was intended for the negative Folks.
Hey @middlestan! Thanks for sharing 'Tries' with us! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Nice flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is fire, good choice. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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