LIlJay- correction
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•18 Jun 2021
ah yeah, and i be tryna make the right direction but i always get the most affection,and i realize that i need more protection, ah at least i made the right correction for the the right direction that i need it ncorrected my mistakes i be making, i lost my mind most of time, i need ma time for own reasons im micronesian viber tryna be on top like Bieber,hated getting lessons from the teacher cuz hes cheaper and killer...
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Yo @starakaratsdemoss, It's time for us to take a look at 'LIlJay- correction'! 💥 "hated getting lessons from the teacher cuz hes cheaper" You had some nice bars on this track with strong rhymes running. Great delivery, your voice adds rhythm to the track. Also good effort with your timing, you are mostly on the beat here, just watch out at certain points not to lose it. 🙏 911...I'd like to report some fire. Great beat choice! Got that funky music box sound goin on that we really fw. This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: -Take advantage of the Rap Fame studio & test out different recording techniques to improve your audio quality. ✨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! 🔥 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! 🤟 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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