Yo @tyroneowens!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'jreza & lil boss'!
The track has meaning.
Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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only want me fo the money. this is a track me and jroc came up with hope y'all feel it.
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
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Yo @tyroneowens! Waddup - let's take a look at 'jreza & lil boss'! The track has meaning. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The beat is fire, nice choice. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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