Hi @minesetmusic!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Heart on my sleeve '!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track.
Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try practising effects more to see how they work best.
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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My rendition of 4 morant by Doja Cat. #remix #sample
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
@johnny7blaze thank you :)
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
@goblin_420 damn thanks bro appreciate it
dope music peep my tracksπ₯π₯π
Hi @minesetmusic! Welcome to our feedback of 'Heart on my sleeve '! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯