lollypop

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lollypop oh lollypop you looking good in the sheets oh lollypop I'm gonna make you wet lollypop..1234 .... oh my lollypop how do you like your medium rares. lollypop oh lollypop my sweet and tasty lollypop oh lollypop oooooooh lollypop won't you come and stay. my lollypop so tasty she makes all the other lollypops jealous and my candy cane so strong he can lift me up oh candy cane oh candy cane oh my delicious candy cane...1234 candy cane cane cane cane cane.1234567 lollypop

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Baileigh

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5 years ago

🎑MASTERCEREMONY/M.C SOULO

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

GoldyCalhoun OGCHO99ER

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

MK_FILL

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Hi @ak30! Welcome to our feedback of 'lollypop'! Good choice of beat! Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

DaMicrowave

5 years ago

bro fire Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

,Grass=Hopper

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

Waxy Gordon

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

KOBAIN💯

6 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥