Hey @mjburton4!
Thanks for sharing 'SWEET (11:50)' with us!
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice.
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through.
Good choice of beat! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it!
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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please vote on my battle Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
๐ฒ๐ฅ๐๐๐ Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Hey @mjburton4! Thanks for sharing 'SWEET (11:50)' with us! Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Good choice of beat! Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
#LLO4E Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
I will make a new one
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
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@mjburton4
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Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ