Yo @nubainnatara!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'dark hail queen'!
The lyrics are fire, nicely done!
Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
The rhyming is well put together. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: On point π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Yo @nubainnatara! Waddup - let's take a look at 'dark hail queen'! The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The rhyming is well put together. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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