Hi @jameslahlani!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Trash π πΏ By James Jay'!
Nice meaning behind the track!
Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review!
Dope beat, really works for this track!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @jameslahlani! Welcome to our feedback of 'Trash π πΏ By James Jay'! Nice meaning behind the track! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. This is too short, please share a longer track for us to review! Dope beat, really works for this track! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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