Hey @1871!
Thanks for sharing 'motorboating' with us!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track.
Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try practising effects more to see how they work best.
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @1871! Thanks for sharing 'motorboating' with us! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥