Yo @fallonleigh!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'preview 1,2 😂'!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice.
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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thanks so much!!
Yo @fallonleigh! Waddup - let's take a look at 'preview 1,2 😂'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team