SMIDGEON OF listenin’
ShiSter Holy Ghost I Blue My Post, A mental ghost. Stronger in My Mind I Began Growin Up In A Sense If Realism A Choppy Spit, Throaty Lick. Ignited Bic, COconspicuous. Not another Dis, This The Track. Said I had enough of Your Shit, Sad But I Just Gotta Get Away Hidden Ambulance. Surround sounded by the ambience. Sense a Nickles made for every cent gettin spent. Picked you up, why the sudden rush I love. Same thing that’s motivatin me to make this track get Sunk. Deep Cracks. Cheaper bags Lose Cannon. Hurts Swallow. Hers Shallow. Satisfies me every time. She kiss the neck So sloppy. Catch it in some hidden text. I ain’t that fucking Slow Junkie. Dosey doe around the truth all day Excepted that these people are just human Beings. That’s what felt so hard for us to overcome. Still don’t recognize to the harm we done. Naturally I went to repent, and I need to be doin that again cause honestly that’s when I felt better. In some realer since of the word, time is only in essence. Look like a lesson, boy cash on this resin. Let it hit, Let that damage Hear that Littering That’s you That’s me, That’s all of us We think Sometimes Too much Hits you deep, Understand One thing It does Just not to every one, Sound like it’s made up That’s why I got a record So I could spread the Chorus They be workin hard To work themselves to dust On the cusp of things I hear the door bust up I’m out the window. Like circus hoops, Doin loops this the sound that be real important to a few. A sum of you. Individual who Hearing this all the way through.. Even just reading it you feel better too. Ya will eventually too. If don’t trust me , you ask them and they’ll tell ya too.
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ShiSter Holy Ghost I Blue My Post, A mental ghost. Stronger in My Mind I Began Growin Up In A Sense If Realism A Choppy Spit, Throaty Lick. Ignited Bic, COconspicuous. Not another Dis, This The Track. Said I had enough of Your Shit, Sad But I Just Gotta Get Away Hidden Ambulance. Surround sounded by the ambience. Sense a Nickles made for every cent gettin spent. Picked you up, why the sudden rush I love. Same thing that’s motivatin me to make this track get Sunk. Deep Cracks. Cheaper bags Lose Cannon. Hurts Swallow. Hers Shallow. Satisfies me every time. She kiss the neck So sloppy. Catch it in some hidden text. I ain’t that fucking Slow Junkie. Dosey doe around the truth all day Excepted that these people are just human Beings. That’s what felt so hard for us to overcome. Still don’t recognize to the harm we done. Naturally I went to repent, and I need to be doin that again cause honestly that’s when I felt better. In some realer since of the word, time is only in essence. Look like a lesson, boy cash on this resin. Let it hit, Let that damage Hear that Littering That’s you That’s me, That’s all of us We think Sometimes Too much Hits you deep, Understand One thing It does Just not to every one, Sound like it’s made up That’s why I got a record So I could spread the Chorus They be workin hard To work themselves to dust On the cusp of things I hear the door bust up I’m out the window. Like circus hoops, Doin loops this the sound that be real important to a few. A sum of you. Individual who Hearing this all the way through.. Even just reading it you feel better too. Ya will eventually too. If don’t trust me , you ask them and they’ll tell ya too.
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