Yung
Chillin by my self jus me an I. Grindin all day I keep pullin the dimes. I gotta get em an neva diss em. I make dimensions. Fuck the system it will always glitch. Dont worry I'm not a snitch. Floatin on a cloud I'm feelin high up in tha mountain. It truly is astoundin. I'm bout to bring the hounds in. Dont like problems but if there's beef you know I'll pound em. Spit like a fountain spits water. I'm on fire. You know I'm with it. Talkin chips I'm gettin it. Bro I be spittin real fast. Tryin to get my guap up. They can try but neva gonna stop us. Hit a dab an I'm coughin a lung up. Hit you one time an you fold like a chair bruh. You just a pussy. Rollin you up with a loose-leaf while I be trippin on lucy. Shit is nothing new to me. Im in the zone still gonna rise. Fuck mob ties momma died for that shit. She even wore a disguise an still got targeted. Now that's a shame. Wanna learn? Theirs no rules to the game. Break it open goin hard in the paint. Now I wanna go back to them days. But never gonna go back to them ways. HELL NAH! Now I know I be a little lyrical. But understand that I'm still spiritual. Man I'm busy I got some things to do. So i can't be chillin in the livin room. Got a lot of weed on me its enough. Mixin X with the drank it's a must. Yeah we like to get lit get crunk. Run it up run it up run it up!
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Chillin by my self jus me an I. Grindin all day I keep pullin the dimes. I gotta get em an neva diss em. I make dimensions. Fuck the system it will always glitch. Dont worry I'm not a snitch. Floatin on a cloud I'm feelin high up in tha mountain. It truly is astoundin. I'm bout to bring the hounds in. Dont like problems but if there's beef you know I'll pound em. Spit like a fountain spits water. I'm on fire. You know I'm with it. Talkin chips I'm gettin it. Bro I be spittin real fast. Tryin to get my guap up. They can try but neva gonna stop us. Hit a dab an I'm coughin a lung up. Hit you one time an you fold like a chair bruh. You just a pussy. Rollin you up with a loose-leaf while I be trippin on lucy. Shit is nothing new to me. Im in the zone still gonna rise. Fuck mob ties momma died for that shit. She even wore a disguise an still got targeted. Now that's a shame. Wanna learn? Theirs no rules to the game. Break it open goin hard in the paint. Now I wanna go back to them days. But never gonna go back to them ways. HELL NAH! Now I know I be a little lyrical. But understand that I'm still spiritual. Man I'm busy I got some things to do. So i can't be chillin in the livin room. Got a lot of weed on me its enough. Mixin X with the drank it's a must. Yeah we like to get lit get crunk. Run it up run it up run it up!
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ฅ๐๐๐ Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Hi @yung_rook! Welcome to our feedback of 'Yung'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Good choice of beat! Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Cool balance between explicit and clean language, it brings out the best in your lyrics. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
sick man! U mind checkin my track? #INCEPTHORRORSHOW Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ