Hi adewaleleo!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Shaye🌈🥂🍾🍷'!
Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! The recordin' is solid, everything is clear.
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! A little more passion in your delivery would really help get your story across!
You've used a dope balance of clean and explicit language.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Just wanna do this swears 💯#no nyame
Hi adewaleleo! Welcome to our feedback of 'Shaye🌈🥂🍾🍷'! Nice meaning behind the track, it's dope! The recordin' is solid, everything is clear. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix! Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out! Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound! Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics! A little more passion in your delivery would really help get your story across! You've used a dope balance of clean and explicit language. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team