Hi @lawrenceellison.7102!
Welcome to our feedback of '4 IN DA CHEST._2'!
The rhyming is well put together.
Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics.
We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. The beat is dope and really works for this track. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Doing ya thing... #back2cali #reignitpoor Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
@jegeboy GOOD πππ LOOKING
WOW REALLY DANG,IT. KRAZY PART OF IT ALL, I COULDN'T EVEN WRITE THE TRAXK. TRUTH... THANK YOU 4 THE π
Hi @lawrenceellison.7102! Welcome to our feedback of '4 IN DA CHEST._2'! The rhyming is well put together. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. The beat is dope and really works for this track. The recording is good quality, we can hear each element. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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WORD WOW DAMNIT I DIDN'T EVEN THINK I STILL HAD MY FREESTYLE LYRICS FLOW IN ME. TRIPLE FAXTZ
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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