Yo @kennethallendawkinsadams!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'walk it talk it'!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track.
Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
Good choice of beat! You haven't used too much explicit language, which is dope.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Yo @kennethallendawkinsadams! Waddup - let's take a look at 'walk it talk it'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Good choice of beat! You haven't used too much explicit language, which is dope. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Letβs GOOO πΏ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Nice!!!
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯