Yo @caestro_dave!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Skittles'!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit?
Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! Your timing is great, well done. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
she wanted me
she wanna see
count one to three
A B C A B C D
she start to scream
was like a dream
shit was extreme
it was a scheme
she wanna play me like jack
told me to hit from the back
she wan take me of the track
told me to roll with the pack
I thought that she was a lady
FUCK it this bitch was so crazy
she used to think she was eighty
think that she served in the navy
ama fly around like am spyro
she wanted it so bad was like she a psycho
ama drop it little little little like its micro
drop the sick moves on the floor like its Disco
curtains would be useless if there were no windows
just like there would be no one if there was no zero
and there would be no ending if there was no intro
when niggas think they past me I bust out the nitro
I got no time can't check the clock
they brought the knife I brought the glock
all markets dry I bought the stock
done being alone I joined the flock
they hard as bone am hard as rock
raps so electric giving em shock
break down the doors never gon knock
grew out my wings turned to the hawk
I sailed offshore I left the dock
always gonna fly never gon walk
always show action stop all the talk
they tried to stop me broke em like blocks
am in my Gucci's they in their socks
brave like a badger tricky like fox
dropped all the plague gave em the pox
when he got angry gave em the frogs
enemies are speechless they got no reaction
cause I made it this far without no extraction
they thought they could stop me with all the distraction
i work till I die till I got mind satisfaction
but I used to work for all little transaction
till I change my mind that I want all the fraction
then I started adding stopped all the subtraction
then shit started changing cause I took those actions
Now momma is proud of me
papa also proud of me
sisters also proud of me
Everyone be hailing me
cause I worked entirely
to take care of family
All ma gees are proud of me
all those bitches calling me
other rappers feeling me
now I can live happily
knowing people proud of me
this was just a fantasy
now is my reality
I came from the locality
now I got all the property
now I can sleep peacefully
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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Yo @caestro_dave! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Skittles'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Awesome energy in your delivery, nicely done! Your timing is great, well done. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
she wanted me she wanna see count one to three A B C A B C D she start to scream was like a dream shit was extreme it was a scheme she wanna play me like jack told me to hit from the back she wan take me of the track told me to roll with the pack I thought that she was a lady FUCK it this bitch was so crazy she used to think she was eighty think that she served in the navy ama fly around like am spyro she wanted it so bad was like she a psycho ama drop it little little little like its micro drop the sick moves on the floor like its Disco curtains would be useless if there were no windows just like there would be no one if there was no zero and there would be no ending if there was no intro when niggas think they past me I bust out the nitro I got no time can't check the clock they brought the knife I brought the glock all markets dry I bought the stock done being alone I joined the flock they hard as bone am hard as rock raps so electric giving em shock break down the doors never gon knock grew out my wings turned to the hawk I sailed offshore I left the dock always gonna fly never gon walk always show action stop all the talk they tried to stop me broke em like blocks am in my Gucci's they in their socks brave like a badger tricky like fox dropped all the plague gave em the pox when he got angry gave em the frogs enemies are speechless they got no reaction cause I made it this far without no extraction they thought they could stop me with all the distraction i work till I die till I got mind satisfaction but I used to work for all little transaction till I change my mind that I want all the fraction then I started adding stopped all the subtraction then shit started changing cause I took those actions Now momma is proud of me papa also proud of me sisters also proud of me Everyone be hailing me cause I worked entirely to take care of family All ma gees are proud of me all those bitches calling me other rappers feeling me now I can live happily knowing people proud of me this was just a fantasy now is my reality I came from the locality now I got all the property now I can sleep peacefully
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