Stand and burn
I can't numb the pain but the feelings hurt i can't stay the same it don't seem to work we've been forged in flames i've got much to learn i know i must change stand and burn. i've been scared and bruised it's hard to choose and tho i've struggled gaining i'm too far to lose my chance to prove my worth and start anew i answer to myself never after you when your indoctrinated hatred is all you have known grown on the teachings of those looking to strip you of hope hung at the end of the rope choking on he couldn't cope prince of my kingdom so why did i feel so cold and alone i must be one who atones forks in my paths and my roads mind bout to burst and explode dragging back to my home my throne look at what i've been shown i'll make a choice on my own gaze at the sins of our people i felt it down the bone i felt it down to my blood i felt it down to my heart taking a breath in the darkness i see the light in the dark i see the vision of greatness i see the man from my past i see the choices i'm making i see the hurt and the scares i can't numb the pain but the feelings hurt I can't stay the same it don't seem to work we've been forged in flames i've got much to learn I know I must change stand and burn feel the fire and flames as it's burns up i can never be the same watch it burned up i feel the fire and flames as it burns up i can never be the same watch it burned up
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I can't numb the pain but the feelings hurt i can't stay the same it don't seem to work we've been forged in flames i've got much to learn i know i must change stand and burn. i've been scared and bruised it's hard to choose and tho i've struggled gaining i'm too far to lose my chance to prove my worth and start anew i answer to myself never after you when your indoctrinated hatred is all you have known grown on the teachings of those looking to strip you of hope hung at the end of the rope choking on he couldn't cope prince of my kingdom so why did i feel so cold and alone i must be one who atones forks in my paths and my roads mind bout to burst and explode dragging back to my home my throne look at what i've been shown i'll make a choice on my own gaze at the sins of our people i felt it down the bone i felt it down to my blood i felt it down to my heart taking a breath in the darkness i see the light in the dark i see the vision of greatness i see the man from my past i see the choices i'm making i see the hurt and the scares i can't numb the pain but the feelings hurt I can't stay the same it don't seem to work we've been forged in flames i've got much to learn I know I must change stand and burn feel the fire and flames as it's burns up i can never be the same watch it burned up i feel the fire and flames as it burns up i can never be the same watch it burned up
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Hi @dangschadrac! Welcome to our feedback of 'Stand and burn '! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are real quiet, could you put 'em up? The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. You're not quite on beat, we suggest workin on your timing a little. Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥