you asked for a critique:
I'd like to hear the lyrics a little clearer and a little more varience in tone throughout the verse.
but essentially it's all there. lyrics are fine, you're on beat and in time.
next time I'd like to hear you go longer and with a little more 'attack'
👍
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Freestyle over a boom bap beat @rizapenjoelbeat
Beautiful, much appreciated
you asked for a critique: I'd like to hear the lyrics a little clearer and a little more varience in tone throughout the verse. but essentially it's all there. lyrics are fine, you're on beat and in time. next time I'd like to hear you go longer and with a little more 'attack' 👍
not too bad